To my Pirate Queen

To my Pirate Queen
I am sick
Stoke down with an incurable disease
And I blame it on you
You are the one
Who have thorn my heart a part
Thorn my heart into thousand pieces
You are the cure
You are the remedy
You are the one
Who can make me complete
Without you I am fumbling in blind
My heart bleeding endlessly
You are the cork which
Fits into my open wound
Without you I am no man
No match, not living
I will seek you wherever you are
To get cured
You are the pole that holds me up
If only you knew
I hope you will see clear one day
And come to my aid
Then I will never leave you side
Be around you like a ring on you finger
Never getting off
I hope you know one day
I hope it will be soon
My Pirate Queen

spelling corrections that might help you win back your pirate queen. Good luck! :)
To my Pirate Queen
I am sick
Struck down with an incurable disease
And I blame it on you
You are the one
Who have torn my heart apart
Torn my heart into thousand pieces
You are the cure
You are the remedy
You are the one
Who can make me complete
Without you I am fumbling in blind
My heart's bleeding endlessly
You are the cork which
Fits into my open wound
Without you I am no man
No match, not living
I will seek you wherever you are
To get cured
You are the pole that holds me up
If only you knew
I hope you will see clear one day
And come to my aid
Then I will never leave your side
Be around you like a ring on your finger
Never getting off
I hope you know one day
I hope it will be soon
My Pirate Queen

I was vaive once.

Så kan det være det samme! Det er jo ikke der hunde ligger begravet!

Se selv på dansk er jeg en sprogspasser !
Men det er jo ikke det, det skal komme an på, det er mere indholdet, du bedømmer heller ikke en bog på omslaget vel !!

Det er ok, hvis hun er ordblind ogs'. Men du har jo skrevet et smukt digt, so why spoil it with bad spelling? :)

And have taken action in the right direction, thrown away my last vice for good ;-)
Year tanks for your fine thoughts, and I get your drift. English isent my prime language, hence this spelling errors.