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Betty

Ohh my little missy,
Do my love make u dizzy?
ohh my little ho,
God I want u so.
My love, my dear,
Do you know what you should fear?
“when you cry”
cause it makes me so damn high.
You it´s about,
I LOVE IT WHEN YOU SHOUT.
My only real fear,
Is that you should find another dear.
So, I watch you when you walk,
when you tries to stalk.
I watch you so,
Watch you, watch you glow.
I watch you from afar,
How beautiful you are.
When you scream out loud,
THEN IN HAPPINESS IM PROUD.
Love it when you smile,
Cause I know it will only be a while.
Before I get you down,
The princes lose her crown.
Her smile she always wears,
Even though her face is full of tears.
That’s when she’s done,
And I realize she is the only one.
I glane into her misty eyes,
I see that’s where the sadness lies.
I hold her in my arms tight,
She looses all her fright.
THAT’S WHEN WE FLYE,
LOVE NEVER DIES.
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vil gerne have lidt feedback

jae, da dette er en sang jeg har skrevet til en af mine kammerater's band, kunne jeg godt tænke mig at få lidt feedback... om i kan lide det ... etc.
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glad over at læse

Meget meget smukt.
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