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And now my love

All I wanted to give you dearly
was all my love so bright and clearly
but you´re afraid - well so am I
and this way were never gonna try
to even see if our love has wings
or if it is only one of those things
that fade in time, bur i do believe
that the love we have will never sleep.
You write that you love me - longer and more
after that you´re closing the door
I just dont get it
Why not let it
Be open and ready for all it could be
why are you so afraid of me
I would never hurt you, I love you so much
I long for your kisses, I long for you touch
But as far as i can see
You are possibly just playing me
And I am obviosly stupid enough to be
In love with the one I can not reach
in time my feelings for you will bleech
I am not a bitch, my love
but when you declare me your love
and then shut me out of your life
I must see it ad a sign of mistrust
eventhough my heart is about to bust
and my eyes red with tears
I am now facing my fears
Either get in or get out
of my life, I do shout
Youre destroying me, and doing it on purpose
that is not love, thats mean and viscious
I hate you for it and will not let you
do it anymore, so i´ve told you
erase me from your memory both in mind and on harddisk
You have a way with words my friend
but live them out, you can not comprehend
your words are hurtful, as you claim to love me
but be afraid to open up for me
as I move on, my love My Charlie
I bear in mind what you made me feel
At least I thank you for making it happen
For letting me know that I have feelings
both good and bad, the last i could do without
My love, My Charlie - Goodbye is the last shout
You are never to contact me again
and I will do the same - its plain
to see the pain you have caused
in me - I just want to die - or set my life in pause
Goodbye my greatest love - words can not express
the feelings I have for you inside
I love you is just not enough!
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Meget..

... flot. Og jeg er sikker på at en del af os synes at have stået i samme situation. Meget velskrevet. Keep up the good work! :D
Det enste som ville sætte prikken over i'et, var at du lige læste det igennem, så små stavefejl eller manglende abostroffer (hvordan staves dét egentlig?!) ville være der.
Men som sagt. Super stærk og flot!
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Tak

Skrev det jo ligesom kl 7 imorges *SS* Så apostroffer og diverse stavefejl må være hvad de er🙂Jeg havde bare brug for at sætte ord på nogle ting :)
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